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    um here are 2 of my poems please tell me is u like

    i wrote this

    WHY

    Why do people live...
    why do people die...
    has my whole life been a lie.


    At first i was happy,
    but now i wana die.
    Has my whole life been a lie.

    All i wanted to do was make her happy.
    Now i only ask why.

    Why did i say it.
    Why will i die.
    Why do i persest to lie.

    I love you,
    wont you please
    love me too.

    When will i die,
    my whole life has just been 1 big lie.

    I wish i could make her happy
    instead of just letting her cry!!!

    Why do we have to die?!?

    Im sorry i really am
    wont you please lend me a hand
    and tell me what i need to do.
    I said im sorry,
    please understand.

    Will i always have to ask why.
    Why was i created.
    Was it
    To live...
    To die...

    WHY


    i didnt writ this 1 but i found it lol hopwe u like

    How many angels more need to cry,
    how long will it be, before I die,
    why do i feel the cold,
    is it time to sing a farewell to my soul....

    Long has it been,
    since me tears have been seen,
    long since I have found someone to hold,
    is it time to sing a farewell to my soul...

    Destination unnamed I have searched,
    prayers I had to say in devil's church
    time is ripe for memories to unfold,
    its time I sing a farewell to my soul..
    Let go of my hand, I need to fly,
    I dont want to stay, where would I..
    my body and mind is no more whole..
    its time to sing a farewell to my soul...

    I have always hidden my own feelings
    long since my tears have been seen.
    It has been so long since I could tell someone what I feel..

    I feel unwanted is it time for me to sing a farewell to my REAL SELF....

    Good Bye....
    CrimsenKnight

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    Re: um here are 2 of my poems please tell me is u like

    Are you submitting these for Poem of the Week (in which case you need to choose one and title the thread with "poem title {date}")? Or should these just be in the normal Poems forum?
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    Re: um here are 2 of my poems please tell me is u like

    This poem is so catchy in a way. I like the part where you question yourself. I love reading this over and over again. It reminds me of me a bit. Well thats just crazy. I hope to see more in the future! I know more other people will like it as well.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: um here are 2 of my poems please tell me is u like

    I see no.. Evidence that you wish to submit this to the Poem of the Week. If you do wish to submit one a day? Then pm either me, chiefblackhammer, or soldat of life.

    I will be moving this otherwise.
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