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Old Oct 08, 2007, 08:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Unbled Suffering

What do I have to do
To earn all your love?
Give you my mind
My body, heart and soul

Do you love me
For who I am?
Or do you wish
To change a piece of me?

Nothing can be changed by you
Tke me for who I am
Or leave me for someone better
The choice is yours to make

My body may be scarred
And it may be swollen
But that should not matter
You should like me for who I am

I can't prevent the scarring
That comes and goes on its own
I'm sick of being judged by you
For my looks and looks alone

You don't know how it hurts
You don't know the pain
The agony of it all
Tears me up inside

You walk over my feelings
Shredding my heart completely
Incapable of loving anyone
My soul bleeds desperately

You don't feel the pain
You can't see the anguish
Your suffering is different
We both bleed inside

We both know some pain
We won't help each other
Thinking we are strong enough
We try to deal on our own

We both hate the pain
We both hate to suffer
Let's just get this over with
One slash and it's all over

comments and critism are welcome so are suggestions on how to fix some of what you think needs mending.
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Re: Unbled Suffering

Not a bad poem. I like it. xD Nicely done and keep up the good work. ^^
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