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![]() Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Arvilla
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,946 | Unbled Suffering What do I have to do To earn all your love? Give you my mind My body, heart and soul Do you love me For who I am? Or do you wish To change a piece of me? Nothing can be changed by you Tke me for who I am Or leave me for someone better The choice is yours to make My body may be scarred And it may be swollen But that should not matter You should like me for who I am I can't prevent the scarring That comes and goes on its own I'm sick of being judged by you For my looks and looks alone You don't know how it hurts You don't know the pain The agony of it all Tears me up inside You walk over my feelings Shredding my heart completely Incapable of loving anyone My soul bleeds desperately You don't feel the pain You can't see the anguish Your suffering is different We both bleed inside We both know some pain We won't help each other Thinking we are strong enough We try to deal on our own We both hate the pain We both hate to suffer Let's just get this over with One slash and it's all over comments and critism are welcome so are suggestions on how to fix some of what you think needs mending.
__________________ Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily! |
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![]() Credits: 2,687 | Re: Unbled Suffering Not a bad poem. I like it. xD Nicely done and keep up the good work. ^^ |
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