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    "Unbreakable Addiction"

    I can't stop...
    My mind thirsts for it.
    I can't think...
    My body deserves it.
    I need this drug,
    my life depends on it.

    I try and stop,
    really I do.
    But the farthest I get,
    I end up here.
    Back at the begining,
    the start of the longing.
    I ache for it all:
    the relief by pain,
    the temperary high,
    the possiblity I may die,
    the evidence I'm alive,
    the peace of release.
    What I crave most though,
    the feel of belonging.
    And once again
    I'm back at the begining.

    I can't stop...
    My mind thirsts for it.
    I can't think...
    My body deserves it.
    I need this drug,
    my life demands it.

    Why can't I stop?
    I try,
    really I do.
    But this want is so strong,
    and I am so weak.
    The desire is to much,
    and listness to unyielding.
    Always longing,
    I end up at the begining.
    I want to feel full,
    I want to feel whole.
    I desire it all:
    the visibility of blood,
    the freedom of love,
    the connection with others,
    the feel of their blows,
    the glimps of belonging.
    And yet again,
    I end up at the begining.

    I can't stop...
    My mind thirsts for it.
    I can't think...
    My body deserves it.
    I need this drug,
    my life demands it.
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    Re: "Unbreakable Addiction"

    It sounds like a poem about someone who is seriously addicted to drugs and in some way is asking for help. Good job.
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