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    "uncertain soul"

    My uncertain soul melts entirely into oblivion
    While I'm puzzled by the visible scars,
    I stretch out my hand.


    In a bright white field of vision,
    At the end,
    Time is uncontrollable the tears running off won't come back,
    The promise from that day.


    No one could stop them,
    The tears only we could forgive at our parting
    The past promise we made to stop the mistakes from repeating over again.


    I was unfulfilled by the constantly overflowing passions
    If only just for a little while...,
    I want to return to human form.


    If you're going to erase the pains in my heart,
    Then go right ahead and kill me
    Don't look so lonely,
    At least at the end I want you to smile
    Just for you.

    Take another breath
    You can't find what's important
    Destroy all of the peace
    Make the same mistake over again.


    No one could stop them,
    The tears only we could forgive at our parting
    The past promise we made to stop the mistakes from repeating over again.

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    Re: "uncertain soul"

    This is a really sad poem. But it really does a great job on describing pain. I is all right if I ask why you wrote such a sad poem? Did some one hurt you? To be honest, this poem states how if feel from a recent event that has happened to me.
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    Re: "uncertain soul"

    I wrote this sad poem after a recent break up today...

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    Re: "uncertain soul"

    Right...you just wrote something that was already written in and translated from Japanese, and released on an album over 4 years ago. This is "Lust for Blood", a song by the Japanese artist Gackt off the album Crescent.

    http://www.senshigakuen.com/translat..._for_blood.htm
    Gackt - Lust For Blood Lyrics
    Gackt - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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