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    Uncertainty

    This is what awaits me,
    Like Vergil before the Gates of Hell.
    Execpt this is my personal hell,
    Waiting, being told things from all sides,
    Yet there is not truth,
    I do not have the eyes to see it.
    I fall to my knees and I pray,
    "O Lord, please give me a sign that all is well."

    There is nothing but silence,
    The raven cows into the night.
    I wait for my angel to come but for how long?
    I love her, I want to be with her,
    But there is truth in what she says or is it lies?
    My heart is spinning, pumping
    But will it break before she comes to be my savlation?

    There is darkness all around me,
    As I walk down this path blindly,
    Guided by the angel whose beauty has captured me.
    But will she turn into Medusa?
    Turning me into one of her stone trophies.
    I feel like my heart will become heavy like the stone.
    Yet my love for her is undying,
    Will God give me a sign of what is to come?
    Or will she come to tell me all is well?
    Or will she release me from my torment?
    Uncertainty awaits me like Vergil who stood before the Gates of Hell.

    i dunno anymore ppl. Maybe i should stop opening my heart up and just look closer to where i am. I dunno anymore. I can only hope for the questions to be answer after this weekend. anyway enjoy it.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Uncertainty

    You are such a dark poet XD Good job, it creates a dark image in my mind.

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    Re: Uncertainty

    I see. The fear of hurt gets us all. hmmm.. I like it. Very nice. YEA!! ROOT!! ROOT!!! You wrote with your heart. All bow to you. ^^ I love this poem, and I hope you get that angel if yours.
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    Re: Uncertainty

    sad, but beautiful at the same time...

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    nice one blade x and i hope you will be happier after the weekend ^^
    may God give yu that angel and nothing more or less
    I never know just why you run so far away...far away from me

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    wow... this i really like~! ^.^ it's dark yet captivating...
    nice job on the metaphors... it fits perfectly... good job... ^_^

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    There is no way I will let you win.
    Prepare for my poetry.
    (Nice work Blade X)

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    i'm ready for it any time viper. Jus bring it on.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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