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    Understanding things

    Ever eternal never ending the
    rage inside is never quinched,
    always dieing but to no certain
    end what dies is reborn making
    death a mear wall to be broken.

    The tears and fears of the things
    that make life what it is becomes
    an enigma that never again becomes
    noticable , the eternal mind that
    once was a light of reason is now
    a blood drenched glow that only
    gets dimmer.

    The minds eye is only a foresight,
    always seeing into a future that
    always makes things real, behind
    that looking glass where things seem
    so much better , the truth is that evil
    feeds on things that once where so pure
    and white.

    this poem explains in a way that evil
    no matter how little or noticable is still
    something to be weary of , though im
    still working on how to word things so
    it can be understood better i belive
    the poem will still make since.

    comments and suggestions are welcomed
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    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Understanding things

    I really like your poem. It makes you think of how evil can be around you and yet sometimes you might not even notice it. i look forward to reading your next one.
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