" Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers Undying Devotion:
Devotion to oneself is selfish,
A devotion to another is not,
Death seperates so many,
You must have an undying devotion to another,
You must cheat death at it's own game.
You must have a devotion that stretches across time,space,and even death.
A devotion that last across death is truely,
Undying.
Awesomeness! I am the first to post a reply! Anyway! I totally love the theme of this poem on devotion. It caught my eye as I was cruising through fanfics/poem section. Neatly written, and it levels upon a great idea. The meaning is beautiful. Keep it up! Post more!!!
-Kedar-
nice short sweet poem. I like it coz it sort is true abt those couples who are truly devoted to each other. and cared for them till the end of time.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
It's so true and nice! Keep up the good stuff
I wonder, can I top this?
I hope so
that was pretty sweet man, keep it up.
The poem was a bit short, and I definitely wanted more. But it did the job, great work
o~Piggy-san~o
it's short but sweet... nice work!! congratulations!
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
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