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    Undying Devotion:

    Devotion to oneself is selfish,
    A devotion to another is not,
    Death seperates so many,
    You must have an undying devotion to another,
    You must cheat death at it's own game.
    You must have a devotion that stretches across time,space,and even death.
    A devotion that last across death is truely,
    Undying.

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    Awesomeness! I am the first to post a reply! Anyway! I totally love the theme of this poem on devotion. It caught my eye as I was cruising through fanfics/poem section. Neatly written, and it levels upon a great idea. The meaning is beautiful. Keep it up! Post more!!!

    -Kedar-

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    nice short sweet poem. I like it coz it sort is true abt those couples who are truly devoted to each other. and cared for them till the end of time.

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    It's so true and nice! Keep up the good stuff

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    I wonder, can I top this?
    I hope so

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    that was pretty sweet man, keep it up.

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    The poem was a bit short, and I definitely wanted more. But it did the job, great work

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: " Undying Devotion " A tribute to lovers

    it's short but sweet... nice work!! congratulations!

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