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Reply With QuoteWow... It's really long. Kudos to you for finding that many words to write about love. Now, if only there were some descriptive imagery thrown into the mix.
Love, Love, Love
Remember?
What we you used to say...
Love, Love, Love
Could change the world, No matter how much we gave and how much we suffered
Our holding hands seemed to help us along the way
Remember? That was our beautiful past
Now we
We walked in our paths
Far away
Away,
Yes, that was the way
You chose that day
You gave me away
I remember
How your lips parted away
“I Don't Love You ... I... I... Don't Love You Any more..."
Those words left me
Here with my heart being shattered into its blood shaded pieces
My soul condemned to its fate
Shatter, Shatter
I remember your words
Trying to shatter what was dear to me
Now I can't stop
I can't stop bleeding
Until my heart stops beating
And till the day my soul gives up screaming
I can't stop
I can't stop dreaming
About your smile
About your warming feeling
I cry
Each time I try
To forget the way you made my heart rhyme
Despite of what became of us
I still dream about you
I still remember your smile
My Love where have you gone to?
My... My... My Hearts love
I NEED YOU
MY LOVE
Please hear me
Where are you?
I need you here
Both my eyes are have given their tears
Along all there years
Despite all my fears
I never have given up
Not even once all these years
I...I... Can't seem to stop loving you
Can't you see?
I STILL LOVE YOU
I love you with my entire life
I love you with this heart inside of me
My heart is broken
And I still love you
I give my most loving feeling to the
To the love that gave me hope
To the love set me on my path
I Give My Undying Love to You
My Love.....Listen to me
No matter how much we are apart
No matter what becomes of you and me
I Will Love You
My Undying Love...
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
Wow... It's really long. Kudos to you for finding that many words to write about love. Now, if only there were some descriptive imagery thrown into the mix.
Seduced by Flesh
I see that you started out remembering the happy feelings and then switch to what happend to make your love go away! In the last part of this poem you let that person know that you still love them! This is a great poem because it switches and keeps the reader guessing about what cause and why you still love this person! Keep up the good work!
BlueFox1
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