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    Unfound Love

    Twice the sound of heartbeats
    Different rivers of pain
    Flowing through the bonds of love
    Searching for a way of hate

    Lost in crossroads of confusion
    Searching for a lost love
    That can never be found

    The two heartbeats
    Are never one


    Written by Kasai a.k.a. L.N. Freeman


    Edit: Again, I ask that I recieve comments that are more than just a "cool" and "keep it up". I would the readers of the Fanfics and Poems forum to be intelligent and literate. If you're going to comment on my poem please give me criticism. I am trying to grow in my talent.
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    Re: Unfound Love

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai
    Twice the sound of heartbeats
    Different rivers of pain
    Flowing through the bonds of love
    Searching for a way of hate

    Lost in crossroads of confusion
    Searching for a lost love
    That can never be found

    The two heartbeats
    Are never one


    Written by Kasai a.k.a. L.N. Freeman
    Man, as much as I get tired of love poems, this one was a bit sweet...it was short...but...the words made a strong impact even though... Good stuff

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Unfound Love

    wow...i really like this one....it's really good to be so short my friend ^^ but i do like it and please keep it up.
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    I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.

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    Re: Unfound Love

    Most of my old poems are short. When writing them I tried to convey an emotion in few words.
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    Re: Unfound Love

    when two hearts love but never converge

    onto one because of difrent factors is a very true statement

    i think your thoughts on this are intresting do you have any

    that go into more detail i mean i like this poem but i like detail

    when reading
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Unfound Love

    I have many poems to post, yes.
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