Uniquely me

Uniquely me ,for all to see
head up high proud to be me
Uniquely me, like a dove
gods one true gift from above
Uniquely me, yet i feel the same
as every one else in lifes game
Uniquely me, im as different as can be,
nice, calm amd simple yea thats me
Im unique, im odd and im free
Uniquely me, yea thats me

This is an awesome poem. I absolutely love the way you used the rhyme technique. I just wish there were periods to add a better flow.

I enjoyed reading this. I really agree that if there was periods it would be much better. The commas are great. I'm proud to say I read this. Keep up the great work.

thankiesall so much i really feel like im getting better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by Kasai

This is an awesome poem. I absolutely love the way you used the rhyme technique. I just wish there were periods to add a better flow.

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ooo did you mean like kasai? so thats why i keep messin up! anyway nice poem its does have a real flow in it

Hellknight I also think that with yours it seems like your trying to force your thoughts it's not just you not putting periods. As for this Poem by Lost it's just she should put a couple of periods.

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Originally Posted by Ky-lyrra

Hellknight I also think that with yours it seems like your trying to force your thoughts it's not just you not putting periods. As for this Poem by Lost it's just she should put a couple of periods.

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i'lll make sure i remember that next time:D: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by LostbutFound

i'lll make sure i remember that next time:D: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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It's just a suggestion. So don't think nothing of it if you forget ok.