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    Uniquely me

    Uniquely me ,for all to see
    head up high proud to be me
    Uniquely me, like a dove
    gods one true gift from above
    Uniquely me, yet i feel the same
    as every one else in lifes game
    Uniquely me, im as different as can be,
    nice, calm amd simple yea thats me
    Im unique, im odd and im free
    Uniquely me, yea thats me
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Uniquely me

    This is an awesome poem. I absolutely love the way you used the rhyme technique. I just wish there were periods to add a better flow.
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    I enjoyed reading this. I really agree that if there was periods it would be much better. The commas are great. I'm proud to say I read this. Keep up the great work.
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    thankiesall so much i really feel like im getting better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Uniquely me

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    This is an awesome poem. I absolutely love the way you used the rhyme technique. I just wish there were periods to add a better flow.
    ooo did you mean like kasai? so thats why i keep messin up! anyway nice poem its does have a real flow in it

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    Hellknight I also think that with yours it seems like your trying to force your thoughts it's not just you not putting periods. As for this Poem by Lost it's just she should put a couple of periods.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ky-lyrra View Post
    Hellknight I also think that with yours it seems like your trying to force your thoughts it's not just you not putting periods. As for this Poem by Lost it's just she should put a couple of periods.
    i'lll make sure i remember that next time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by LostbutFound View Post
    i'lll make sure i remember that next time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It's just a suggestion. So don't think nothing of it if you forget ok.
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