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I lay in the dunes
The world surrounded by ruins
Alone, unable to find a way home
Desert storms
And faithful homes
It’s all a mystery in disguise
I hear frowns that echo
As the earths gases rise up in smoke
I walk along side what use to be humanity
Now to be left alone at this crowded world
I slip, unable to catch from my fall
Now all that’s left is for me to craw
l
Fragile limbs
Unable to set my foot up to climb
I lay there, wasted, down to every bone
I lay there, bruised, blooded and crying
Thinking I’m alone
A ghostly shadow in the distance

Closer and closer it was
His face covered by the sun
Reached out his hand
And there I stood on the sand
As he took me in his arms
Relieved I was
Cause I no longer have to bare the cross

Wow. This is amazing. Truely amazing. you laid out the picture so clearly. it's a beautiful masterpeice wrapped in a bit of mystery. I love it.

My mom has been taking these poetry classes and they say capitolizing every letter at the beggining of a line is out of style. I hope you don't think I would want to chage it. I love it. I'm just telling you what professionals are saying. ^ ^

Amazing Job!