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    Universe

    Its eyes shine with the brillance of all the night's stars.
    In all things but only admired from afar.
    Constant witness to planets as they fly and turn.
    Its tears streak the sky bright as they quietly burn.
    The brightest light this kindles is a sailors guide.
    How pretty is the great egg that controls the tide.

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    Re: Universe

    WoW very XD nice i really like this one two >M< i love the most the one you written "Its tears streak the sky bright as they quietly burn" >< thins as very lovely ^^ , well i am not surprise to come such good poem from you ^,^ good work my friend XD ... =^_^=
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    Re: Universe

    Aww.... you wrote a poem about me? lol J/k. It's what I would imagine space to be like written very beautifully way.

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    Re: Universe

    It's good but you should cut it up into stanzas to make it look better, but great poem. ^^

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