Frozen Rose (Aug 06, 2009)
Its eyes shine with the brillance of all the night's stars.
In all things but only admired from afar.
Constant witness to planets as they fly and turn.
Its tears streak the sky bright as they quietly burn.
The brightest light this kindles is a sailors guide.
How pretty is the great egg that controls the tide.
Frozen Rose (Aug 06, 2009)
WoW very XD nice i really like this one two >M< i love the most the one you written "Its tears streak the sky bright as they quietly burn" >< thins as very lovely ^^ , well i am not surprise to come such good poem from you ^,^ good work my friend XD ... =^_^=
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!beast (Aug 06, 2009)
Aww.... you wrote a poem about me? lol J/k. It's what I would imagine space to be like written very beautifully way.
Signature is a Gwenibe original.
It's good but you should cut it up into stanzas to make it look better, but great poem. ^^
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