~*~*~*~*~*~* Dedicated to M.K. ~*~*~*~*~*~*
He looks at me and smiles
As I look at him and wonder
Why I tell him things
That I have told no other
He lifts his hand
Touching my bottom lip softly
Opening it slightly, kissing me
God, it felt so lovely
My heart beats faster
With ever word we share
He's known for so long
Just how much i care
I hold him close to me
Never feeling this way before
And each and every day
I feel our love grow even more
I pray that this never ends
That i'll always have you here
And know that whatever happens
I will always be there
~I love you and no matter what happens between us know that i will always be there, I will always care...~
Wow this is really good. Its not that long and its sweet and to the point.
I think you have really caught the esence of every girl or guy and how they feel when they are around the person they love the most. cant wait to read more!:D:
love it, full of emotions and the feeling i get reading is just insane i wish i could write poems that good with love involved in it
Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you liked it. It came from the heart, that's the key Hedge... Just let it come from the heart. -smiles softly- ^^
Hmm. Nice poem really. I like how it starts ... innocenttly. The part where you tell him things unknowingly.
Then as we move down to the intimate part, leading to kissing, to makes the reader so much more active.
Thank you Rave. ^^ I wasn't trying to pull something like that off but I'm glad I was able to even if it was unintentionally. I'm glad you like it.