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    ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    ~*~*~*~*~*~* Dedicated to M.K. ~*~*~*~*~*~*

    ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    He looks at me and smiles
    As I look at him and wonder
    Why I tell him things
    That I have told no other

    He lifts his hand
    Touching my bottom lip softly
    Opening it slightly, kissing me
    God, it felt so lovely

    My heart beats faster
    With ever word we share
    He's known for so long
    Just how much i care

    I hold him close to me
    Never feeling this way before
    And each and every day
    I feel our love grow even more

    I pray that this never ends
    That i'll always have you here
    And know that whatever happens
    I will always be there


    ~I love you and no matter what happens between us know that i will always be there, I will always care...~
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    Wow this is really good. Its not that long and its sweet and to the point.
    I think you have really caught the esence of every girl or guy and how they feel when they are around the person they love the most. cant wait to read more!
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    love it, full of emotions and the feeling i get reading is just insane i wish i could write poems that good with love involved in it
    when the mask comes off the real me appeares

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    Re: ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you liked it. It came from the heart, that's the key Hedge... Just let it come from the heart. -smiles softly- ^^
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    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    Hmm. Nice poem really. I like how it starts ... innocenttly. The part where you tell him things unknowingly.
    Then as we move down to the intimate part, leading to kissing, to makes the reader so much more active.

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    Re: ~*~*Unknown~*~*

    Thank you Rave. ^^ I wasn't trying to pull something like that off but I'm glad I was able to even if it was unintentionally. I'm glad you like it.
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