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    Unleashed and Empty

    You claim someone rejects you,
    Possibly neglects you.
    Yet that someone lingers
    On almost every word you spew.

    Though it may feel abusing,
    It's amusing, because I do it too.
    But the difference is, my words, my world...
    All center around YOU.

    Your actions teach me, they unleash me.
    The shackles are unlocked.
    Sick of not being good enough
    And always getting knocked.

    Your loyalties become quite clear,
    Everytime you talk.
    And, the more I see how stuck you are.
    The farther I can walk.

    I wonder if you see me walking.
    Or if you even care.
    With freedom, comes a vacant heart.
    Because nobody's there.

    The farther I walk, the bigger the hole.
    And there's no way to fill it.
    But, the pain of loving you is gone.
    You've found a way to kill it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Unleashed and Empty

    Ahhh!!! such a great poem!! How I'd wish for that guy I like to do the same as you describe here!!! But he just can't seem to do anything bad enough...
    I'd be happy if I was in place of the lyrical "me" of this poem, though you made it sound sad...

    A nice work... ^^

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    Re: Unleashed and Empty

    Yeah... its a bittersweet feeling to let go of something you've held on to for such a long long time. I guess you just get to the point that you realize the was never a point, Some people never go back.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Unleashed and Empty

    Loved that poem keep it up make some more if you have some more tell me i want to read them please thanks, oh yes and good luck!


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    I will be sure to let you know next time I create something... feel free to add me to your network. I like friends!
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    Re: Unleashed and Empty

    i love this poem because it talks of how
    a lonely heart becomes numb after enough
    has been done to it , and its true that that
    holw can never be filled with love or anything
    thats good , but letting the hole deal its self.

    thats where the new life can begine because that hole
    you had just get filled with al that unwanted emotion
    and it covers that hole really well so the new life can
    smoothly go over what used to be a really big hole.

    thats what i get from this but the poem is really good
    i loved it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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