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    "unloved"

    To love someone,
    is a love which is bitter sweet.

    Loving someone with one's whole heart and soul is a blessing,
    though for that love to be unreturned,
    is nothing less then a curse.

    Plagued by those clouds as to be seen within the heart,
    one wishes only to live as does the setting sun.

    Even as one is repeatedly discarded,
    though still cannot live without yearning and hope to be appreciated
    by ones unloved gentle flower.

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    Re: "unloved"

    what a great poem love the theme you have, it's so lonely post another



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    Re: "unloved"

    So true, man. I like this poem a lot. You did a great job at describing a very complex human emotion. Mad props! I hope to see more. ^_^


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    Re: "unloved"

    so true me like No me LOVE it ......
    yep yep
    good job
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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