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Reply With QuoteHow sad, calmly, and awesome as well. You poems are really good! Hope to see more.Smile Greatly!
You must smile oh so sweetly
When you stroke your own ego
You surely laugh out with glee
At those whose sorrow you sow
How lovely it must be
That twinkle in your eye
You can see it can't you
Watch as their hopes die
Bit by Bit
Piece by Piece
They fall apart
At your feet
Tearing, clawing
Till they cry
Drink those tears
Like a fine wine
It's all your creation
And how merry that must make you
Chuckling to yourself at their humiliation
But still you continue
Now as I study you
I notice something strange...
Your face ... it peels!
And in it's place
A monster is revealed
But I and I alone see this
The others are all ignorant
With that pseudo face of yours
You tear apart the innocent
It's time that you be shown
For what you really are
A nasty ... horrid ... dreadful ... Crone!
Soon YOU will fall apart
How sad, calmly, and awesome as well. You poems are really good! Hope to see more.
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Ooooooooh thanks >.< glad you liked it
is it me or does everyone know someone like this?
This one i really liked the flow seemed nice to me and i liked the rhymes in it ,and sadly i do know some one like that.
Well nice poem kimi really liked ithope to see more form you
....Player Killer....??* "There is nothing to fear but F.E.A.R. it self -(F.E.A.R) " ??*
nice the poem reli rthymes and its intesting 5 for 5 ^_^
Hey thank guys I wasnt really sure about the ending but it seems like its working
Nice poem it was sweet and odd all at the same time which made it that more interesting. Good job.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
"odd" ... lol I like that discription lol I deffinitely wasnt going for normal =)
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