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    You must smile oh so sweetly
    When you stroke your own ego
    You surely laugh out with glee
    At those whose sorrow you sow

    How lovely it must be
    That twinkle in your eye
    You can see it can't you
    Watch as their hopes die

    Bit by Bit
    Piece by Piece
    They fall apart
    At your feet

    Tearing, clawing
    Till they cry
    Drink those tears
    Like a fine wine

    It's all your creation
    And how merry that must make you
    Chuckling to yourself at their humiliation
    But still you continue

    Now as I study you
    I notice something strange...
    Your face ... it peels!
    And in it's place
    A monster is revealed

    But I and I alone see this
    The others are all ignorant
    With that pseudo face of yours
    You tear apart the innocent

    It's time that you be shown
    For what you really are
    A nasty ... horrid ... dreadful ... Crone!
    Soon YOU will fall apart

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    Re: Unmasked

    How sad, calmly, and awesome as well. You poems are really good! Hope to see more. Smile Greatly!
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    Ooooooooh thanks >.< glad you liked it
    is it me or does everyone know someone like this?

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    Re: Unmasked

    This one i really liked the flow seemed nice to me and i liked the rhymes in it ,and sadly i do know some one like that.

    Well nice poem kimi really liked it hope to see more form you
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    Re: Unmasked

    nice the poem reli rthymes and its intesting 5 for 5 ^_^

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    Hey thank guys I wasnt really sure about the ending but it seems like its working

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    Nice poem it was sweet and odd all at the same time which made it that more interesting. Good job.
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    "odd" ... lol I like that discription lol I deffinitely wasnt going for normal =)

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