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Apr 19, 2008, 08:18 PM
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  Otaku  | Bitter Unrequittal Why can't I be good enough for you? The simple truth haunts me loud and clear. I love you more than a man can do without losing to a law more true. To make myself a portrait of fear. Why can't I be good enough for you? To give up, is that what I should do To prove what only the heart can hear? "I love you more then a man can do." Pleading pain whilst my heart turns blue "Right here I stand... I'm standing right here!" Why can't I be good enough for you? A simple truth and a pain more true I pushed you off the pier. Now it's clear I've loved you more then a man should do. Scorching, burning now a raging flue inside it screams, it's all right here! Why can't I be good enough for you; ...I love you more then a man can do. |
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Apr 19, 2008, 08:28 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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 Credits: 10,233 | Re: Unrequittal Wow this is a really good poem ^^, I love how you took the colors to your favor and made it part of the poem. I love the poem, it reminds me of a poem I wrote before. It reminded me of what my friend and I talked about before, love.
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Apr 19, 2008, 08:33 PM
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| Otaku | Re: Unrequittal Thankyou, read the title... that's what it really is ^^ it's from a situation with one of my friends a while back... but yeah I hope that people don't take this the wrong way. I put it here because it's something that I thought people would appreciate. Not because it's reflecting how I currently feel. I actually feel the opposite right now. |
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Apr 20, 2008, 12:45 AM
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Credits: 14,876 | Re: Unrequittal Sounds like a person absorbed deep into his thoughts, and are the different thoughts and feelings represented by different colours? Interesting poem. And what does "Unrequittal" stand for?
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Apr 20, 2008, 08:13 AM
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| Otaku | Re: Unrequittal It's a word that I made up... it's hard to describe what it means intelligently because it's more of a feeling then a thought. It's the word to describe the state of being unrequited. I liked the sound of it because it has a generally soft sound with a harh sound in the middle similar to that lulling feeling of being in love with those little twings of truth the - "maybe _____ doesn't like me" whish is then excused by the soft feeling of the state your in... until it comes to a sliding halt. That's it, proof that when I'm depressed I think about pointless things too much ! I don't really like the color now that it's there but it's too late to change it now... oh well the reason why I did it at6 the time was to emphasize things that didn't need to be. |
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