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    UnSpoken Words

    Packed deep inside
    Unspoken words i do so hide
    I never said
    You never read
    Words burning a hole in my heart
    So many words no where to start
    What i need
    is you to read
    from the start
    Of my heart

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    Re: UnSpoken Words

    I actually like this poem. I'd want some punctuation. This sounds a bit weird to me: What i need
    is you to read
    from the start
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: UnSpoken Words

    i liek this one too give a sence of in been and how it feel to like some one and not be able to express it

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