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    unsure of a title!

    Everything is falling down like pouring
    rain on a moon lit night ,nothing can be
    heard as the screams in my heart go unheard
    and i crack that sickening smile.

    I open my eyes to you and see you
    walk away as my thoughts drift to
    a better time when hate flowed freely
    through me , you came into my life as
    i was taking that final step into darkness.

    How can you see into my eye's? why
    do you have so much faith in me? when
    was it that i was worth anything? where is
    it that you think i want to go? can you see
    something i cant?

    I always walk on never seeing the light,
    never beliving anything ,you put so much
    of your self in me, making believe in things that
    i thought were just lies or dreams.

    Nothing is ever what we make it because
    life will change it....

    this poem is about faith i know i did a poem
    about this already but this one shows more with
    how the person who is loved cant really see why but
    they accept knowing that they love the new feeling.
    comments and sugestions are welcomed not sure what to name
    this one lol theres a first for everything i reckon
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: unsure of a title!

    Hey Bro! This poem is really deep and I could see why you couldn't name it! But the poem really hits some key points especially when your lost and you don't know what to do! Hey how about naming it "Unforeseen Faith" ? Either way Bro this poem is brilliant! Keep it up Bro!

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    Re: unsure of a title!

    thanks man im glad you liked it and that sounds like a good
    title for it, and i read your peoms your really getting good
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: unsure of a title!

    As always big bro you never disapoint me.I soooo loved this 1 as well. This reminds me a bit about myself lol. Awesome job as always big bro!!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: unsure of a title!

    That was a very nice poem. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work.
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