until after

i remember the pain in his eyes
that reached into his soul,
that sweat though his glands,
that could fell when you touched his hand,
that you could hear on his breath ,
that stomped under his step,
that shook his laugter,
that i didn't see until......................
after

This is a good poem....keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon. ;)

Short and simple yet beautiful. ^_^ I love this poem. Good job!!! Write more, please!!!

Haha, you have the most unique poems here, I love them. Great job