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    Smile until after


    i remember the pain in his eyes
    that reached into his soul,
    that sweat though his glands,
    that could fell when you touched his hand,
    that you could hear on his breath ,
    that stomped under his step,
    that shook his laugter,
    that i didn't see until......................
    after
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: until after

    This is a good poem....keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon.

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    Re: until after

    Short and simple yet beautiful. ^_^ I love this poem. Good job!!! Write more, please!!!

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    Re: until after

    Haha, you have the most unique poems here, I love them. Great job
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