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Old Sep 07, 2006, 01:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well hello people whats up any way i am not good at poetry, so this originall was a song, never got pased the second verse here it is...

This is how I really am,
so you can take me or leave me,
loving or hating,
thats not how I wanted it to be,
but the way you ignored me when you said that you'd be my friend
...apparently not that way.

So as I sit here raving and raging,
at all the things I've done wrong,
sitting in regret,
thinking that it's over,
but the flames that were supposed to go out were left smouldering,
and now the flames of of rage have been rekindled,
as I sit here nerve racked and quiet, keeping the fires low.

well that was my swing at it. I felt that way earlier, but its gone.
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 02:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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very cool poem rage is something everyone has but its what you do with it that matter's , the build of the rage like you did here was pretty good alos
you should try and do another sometime
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 02:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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....what really? Honestly?
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 03:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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coolness!!!!! you have got some talent! that was really good!
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Old Sep 08, 2006, 05:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks again only when i get worked up, this is my last line before losing all control
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Yea it's cool! I've felt the feel of ignorance before and your poem absolutely represent it... So its a song? I'm wondering how the melody he3x
kepp the good work.

nice razgriz emblem there
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Old Sep 08, 2006, 07:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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uh ok thanks for the good woords schwarze, only last resorts
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..."now the flames of of rage have been rekindled,
as I sit here nerve racked and quiet, keeping the fires low."

Its really beautiful!! Can i borrow this part?? I real love it
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hey
that song of yours is pretty cool
it would have alot of potential , trully man it would be a cool song
you should try doing another one
you have talent
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well thank you to of you who posted in the here, i dont know if i get worked up again an i write stuff down, if it comes down to this, and another is written i will post
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Good way to release the rage in the second part of this song! I wish I could've saw the first part! Good work!

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