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    Re: Untitled

    hey
    that song of yours is pretty cool
    it would have alot of potential , trully man it would be a cool song
    you should try doing another one
    you have talent
    keep it up
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    well thank you to of you who posted in the here, i dont know if i get worked up again an i write stuff down, if it comes down to this, and another is written i will post
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    Good way to release the rage in the second part of this song! I wish I could've saw the first part! Good work!

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    thaks blue fox one for the kind words.
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    Re: Untitled

    Ok heres some more of the song, if you are just reading this read the very firs post first. Also its got a name now its called "Burn the Promise."

    Bear my teeth at the sight of jealousy and and hate,
    watching as the two take turns stabbing at me,
    from the inside,
    wanting to be happy,
    she goes back on her word,
    burn the promise,
    burn it to ash and bone.

    Relying on music, friends, and love,
    still looking for the last,
    ask myself,
    is it through?
    So the promise,
    burn the promise,
    burn it to ash and bone.

    During the aftermath,
    skipping like a stone,
    carefree for the moment,
    waiting on the time,
    not wanting it to go back that way.

    So the promise,
    burn it down,
    burn it to ash and bone.

    that may not be as good as the firs one but i think that that is the whole song, once again "Burn the Promise". Thanks to the bands Queens of the Stone Age and 30 Second to Mars fpr inspiriation.
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    Re: Untitled

    hey man , that one was awesoooooooooome,
    strong words make a strong song,
    this is very good
    keep on writing
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