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    Untitled

    I said my words,
    Wishing they would never be hurt.
    I saw you smiling at me,
    Was that just my fantasy?
    I see you talking to other men,
    So let me come to you.
    Closes as I wanna be,
    Enough for me to feel your heart.
    I whisper to you,
    My last night here for you.
    I kinda liked it your way,
    How you kindly placed your eyes on me.
    I'm confused inside,
    I know what we had.
    Or was it just a dream?
    Love... I don't know,
    Can I ever again...

    Please comment ^_^
    Last edited by Violent; Sep 23, 2006 at 11:19 PM.

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: Untitled

    Omg!! This was truly wonderful!! The emotion was very strong.I really liked this and enjoyed reading it very much. Awesome job Violent.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Untitled

    I really liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next poem.

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    Ty I'll post a poem or try every week ;/

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    Re: Untitled

    This is so awesome, its a cute poem. ^-^


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Thank you ^_^ I look forward to me writing many more poems while I'm here

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    Well I can't wait till then if its anything like this poem! ^-^


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    *claps*good job it was really kool ^^

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