Untitled

*Violent* · Sep 23, 2006, 11:07 PM

I said my words,
Wishing they would never be hurt.
I saw you smiling at me,
Was that just my fantasy?
I see you talking to other men,
So let me come to you.
Closes as I wanna be,
Enough for me to feel your heart.
I whisper to you,
My last night here for you.
I kinda liked it your way,
How you kindly placed your eyes on me.
I'm confused inside,
I know what we had.
Or was it just a dream?
Love... I don't know,
Can I ever again...

Please comment ^_^

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Sep 24, 2006, 02:24 AM

Omg!! This was truly wonderful!! The emotion was very strong.I really liked this and enjoyed reading it very much.

Awesome job Violent.

*CherryBlossom18* · Sep 24, 2006, 10:54 AM

I really liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next poem.

*Violent* · Sep 24, 2006, 03:06 PM

Ty I'll post a poem or try every week ;/

fma1012 · Sep 24, 2006, 03:15 PM

This is so awesome, its a cute poem. ^-^

*Violent* · Sep 24, 2006, 03:36 PM

Thank you ^_^ I look forward to me writing many more poems while I'm here

fma1012 · Sep 24, 2006, 03:45 PM

Well I can't wait till then if its anything like this poem! ^-^

anime cutie · Sep 24, 2006, 03:51 PM

*claps*good job it was really kool ^^

Sep 23, 2006, 11:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
Violent AO's Stoner ~ Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,674 Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 8 Posts	Untitled I said my words, Wishing they would never be hurt. I saw you smiling at me, Was that just my fantasy? I see you talking to other men, So let me come to you. Closes as I wanna be, Enough for me to feel your heart. I whisper to you, My last night here for you. I kinda liked it your way, How you kindly placed your eyes on me. I'm confused inside, I know what we had. Or was it just a dream? Love... I don't know, Can I ever again... Please comment ^_^ __________________ Obey the forum rules and I will love you! AnimeOnline IRC check my profile for details! Last edited by Violent; Sep 24, 2006 at 12:19 AM.
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Sep 24, 2006, 02:24 AM	#2 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel Sorrow's Angel Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD Posts: 690 Thanks: 40 Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Untitled Omg!! This was truly wonderful!! The emotion was very strong.I really liked this and enjoyed reading it very much. Awesome job Violent. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Untitled I really liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next poem.
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Violent AO's Stoner ~ Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,674 Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Untitled Ty I'll post a poem or try every week ;/ __________________ Obey the forum rules and I will love you! AnimeOnline IRC check my profile for details!
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fma1012 Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: down the street ;] Posts: 478 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Untitled This is so awesome, its a cute poem. ^-^ __________________ ThAnKs CaNdId FoR ThE SwEet SiG~
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Violent AO's Stoner ~ Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,674 Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Untitled Thank you ^_^ I look forward to me writing many more poems while I'm here __________________ Obey the forum rules and I will love you! AnimeOnline IRC check my profile for details!
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fma1012 Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: down the street ;] Posts: 478 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Untitled Well I can't wait till then if its anything like this poem! ^-^ __________________ ThAnKs CaNdId FoR ThE SwEet SiG~
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anime cutie Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Florida Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Untitled clapsgood job it was really kool ^^
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