Omg!! This was truly wonderful!! The emotion was very strong.I really liked this and enjoyed reading it very much.Awesome job Violent.
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I said my words,
Wishing they would never be hurt.
I saw you smiling at me,
Was that just my fantasy?
I see you talking to other men,
So let me come to you.
Closes as I wanna be,
Enough for me to feel your heart.
I whisper to you,
My last night here for you.
I kinda liked it your way,
How you kindly placed your eyes on me.
I'm confused inside,
I know what we had.
Or was it just a dream?
Love... I don't know,
Can I ever again...
Please comment ^_^
Last edited by Violent; Sep 23, 2006 at 11:19 PM.
Omg!! This was truly wonderful!! The emotion was very strong.I really liked this and enjoyed reading it very much.Awesome job Violent.
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Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
I really liked it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next poem.
Ty I'll post a poem or try every week ;/
This is so awesome, its a cute poem. ^-^
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Thank you ^_^ I look forward to me writing many more poems while I'm here
Well I can't wait till then if its anything like this poem! ^-^
Thanks lifeforce! (:
*claps*good job it was really kool ^^
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