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    Love, even an English poetry place I recently discovered (wich is also French kind of) confirmed me taht poetry is mostly moved by love, soooo, I can't argue about that if so many people say the same thing, though I can still argue if I find something to say about it.

    In your case, you use various words, express yourself a bit informally, but that isn't too much used so I find it okay. I'd say there isn't only a feeling of love inside of this poem, but I won't dwell any further. Kinda, short, but it gives its message none the less. If this one of your first, it's a very nice start, otherwise, I'd say it would still need some practice, but I'd say that to anyone including myself so simply have fun writing and if you want a comment or two, I'll be happy to try and help
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    Its my second poem in 5 years lol xD! I hope to see more more of my poems to come

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    i write poems i even have some of mine in a book, its titled twilight Musings

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    I hope to get better over the years I used to love to write poetry because it was a great way to express my feelings but then I just grew into middle school I guess? Now I think poetry is a great thing again so I hope to get in the 100s of poems

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