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Shu · Nov 06, 2006, 08:39 PM

Curse my enemies forever,
lets slit our wrists and burn down something beautiful
This desperation
leaves me overjoyed
With fading lights
that leads us past the lives that we destroy

*SousukeSagara* · Nov 07, 2006, 04:34 AM

Hmmm... If I'm not mistaken, an art that was made by a poet reflects to whom made it... I hope you'll feel better...
A great piece of art from you Shu...

*BlueFox1* · Nov 10, 2006, 05:50 AM

Such strong emotion in such a short poem! But I like the way you wrote this one and I hope that you feel better! But you used the right method of letting out your anger by writing it down! Thank you for allowing me to read it! Nice job and hope to read more of your work!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Nov 10, 2006, 06:55 AM

awesome poem man it was great and the emootions here i have felt my
self hope you get over it soon, and the way you expressed your anger was pretty cool i felt it my self . cant wait to read another its been a while
your really good

*ketaro* · Nov 10, 2006, 07:14 AM

I don't have words to describe this poem of yours shu. Nice poem indeed.

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BlueFox1 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Untitled Such strong emotion in such a short poem! But I like the way you wrote this one and I hope that you feel better! But you used the right method of letting out your anger by writing it down! Thank you for allowing me to read it! Nice job and hope to read more of your work! __________________
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,939 Thanks: 62 Thanked 55 Times in 52 Posts	Re: Untitled awesome poem man it was great and the emootions here i have felt my self hope you get over it soon, and the way you expressed your anger was pretty cool i felt it my self . cant wait to read another its been a while your really good __________________
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ketaro You's Trollin Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,287 Thanks: 30 Thanked 37 Times in 35 Posts	Re: Untitled I don't have words to describe this poem of yours shu. Nice poem indeed. __________________ O o /¯/___________________________ ________ IM'MA FIRIN' MAH LAZERZ! IBLAAAAAAA! \_\¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯ ¯ ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯
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