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    Curse my enemies forever,
    lets slit our wrists and burn down something beautiful
    This desperation
    leaves me overjoyed
    With fading lights
    that leads us past the lives that we destroy

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    Hmmm... If I'm not mistaken, an art that was made by a poet reflects to whom made it... I hope you'll feel better...
    A great piece of art from you Shu...

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    Such strong emotion in such a short poem! But I like the way you wrote this one and I hope that you feel better! But you used the right method of letting out your anger by writing it down! Thank you for allowing me to read it! Nice job and hope to read more of your work!

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    awesome poem man it was great and the emootions here i have felt my
    self hope you get over it soon, and the way you expressed your anger was pretty cool i felt it my self . cant wait to read another its been a while
    your really good
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    I don't have words to describe this poem of yours shu. Nice poem indeed.

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