atomik_sprout

It seems, to me, that we're growing apart.
We slowly drift away from each other's hearts.

It feels like you no longer want what I've got.
What I have is unconditional, and I have alot.

Lately, it seems that you've finally decided.
I can tell when I look your way, you cannot hide it.

I don't know what I did, or what he said to you.
But I feel like things have died down a notch or two.

I may be wrong, I know you're goin' through some things.
But I can't help but wonder what the future's gonna bring.

Do me a favor, please, just think long and hard.
Will you give me an answer? Am I playing the wrong card?

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Jairo

hey u make it up or is what you really feels?
but is really nice i leke it.

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atomik_sprout

I make rhymes, I don't make up emotions. Never do I write a poem and it's not the way I feel. I write what I feel at that exact moment.

Thanks for your comment and question. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work. ^_^

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bratling

Don't take my distraction as a lack of interest in the relationship between us... I just... I have...numbed myself. I'm self medicating. If I had more tylenol three or something stronger I'd be doped up insted of just high. But I took the last one yesterday and I'm praying the pain in my abdomin doesn't come back. I just...have distracted myself. from everything. I don't think about anything. At all. Except moving. Trees. And that's pretty much it. I ignore the way I feel about anything or anyone right now. Oh and halloween. I'm planning my costume. I need a cute white long sleeve shirt. a tail, ears, leg warmers and some cute shoes. Japanese schoolish catgirl. Yuuup. I gotta show you the pieces I already have... Look i'm babbling. fantastically felt poem. I admire your style the more you write.

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She's always trying not to cry.
But I can see the demons in her eyes.
She's always trying not to yell.
But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.

Astaroth

I loved it!!!!!!!!
Loved the words and the unique rhythm!!!!!!
Great job!!!

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kamikazekrn

as always, you continue to impress me. whenever i check this section you always have something new and still never gets old.

ps. love bratling's tangent post lol

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"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
C.S. Lewis

atomik_sprout

Thanks you guys! I appreciate you taking the time to read my writing. ^_^
It makes me glad to know that you like my work. Thanks for the comments and I hope you like my newer stuff. Bratling, thank you for your words and I hope that you do better. I'll talk to ya later on today, I hope.

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RayMe

agreed with astaroth..and bratling.. lol ^^

Nice style u got there.. ^^ the rhythm is nice... i like it...

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