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    It seems, to me, that we're growing apart.
    We slowly drift away from each other's hearts.

    It feels like you no longer want what I've got.
    What I have is unconditional, and I have alot.

    Lately, it seems that you've finally decided.
    I can tell when I look your way, you cannot hide it.

    I don't know what I did, or what he said to you.
    But I feel like things have died down a notch or two.

    I may be wrong, I know you're goin' through some things.
    But I can't help but wonder what the future's gonna bring.

    Do me a favor, please, just think long and hard.
    Will you give me an answer? Am I playing the wrong card?


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    hey u make it up or is what you really feels?
    but is really nice i leke it.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jairo View Post
    hey u make it up or is what you really feels?
    but is really nice i leke it.
    I make rhymes, I don't make up emotions. Never do I write a poem and it's not the way I feel. I write what I feel at that exact moment.

    Thanks for your comment and question. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work. ^_^


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    Don't take my distraction as a lack of interest in the relationship between us... I just... I have...numbed myself. I'm self medicating. If I had more tylenol three or something stronger I'd be doped up insted of just high. But I took the last one yesterday and I'm praying the pain in my abdomin doesn't come back. I just...have distracted myself. from everything. I don't think about anything. At all. Except moving. Trees. And that's pretty much it. I ignore the way I feel about anything or anyone right now. Oh and halloween. I'm planning my costume. I need a cute white long sleeve shirt. a tail, ears, leg warmers and some cute shoes. Japanese schoolish catgirl. Yuuup. I gotta show you the pieces I already have... Look i'm babbling. fantastically felt poem. I admire your style the more you write.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    I loved it!!!!!!!!
    Loved the words and the unique rhythm!!!!!!
    Great job!!!
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    as always, you continue to impress me. whenever i check this section you always have something new and still never gets old.

    ps. love bratling's tangent post lol
    "Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
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    Thanks you guys! I appreciate you taking the time to read my writing. ^_^
    It makes me glad to know that you like my work. Thanks for the comments and I hope you like my newer stuff. Bratling, thank you for your words and I hope that you do better. I'll talk to ya later on today, I hope.


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    Re: Untitled

    agreed with astaroth..and bratling.. lol ^^

    Nice style u got there.. ^^ the rhythm is nice... i like it...

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