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    I can't think...I wanna die...
    My heart's exploding...I'm gunna cry...
    My life's falling apart...what should I do?
    I'm gunna fly...do what I gotta do...
    Many things have happened...that I can't hold back any longer...
    Tough times are coming...gotta be stronger
    Death strikes the souls of unvanquished truth...
    What has come of me...a storming, unreal fluke...
    Nobody want's to listen...nobody even cares...
    My best friend never talks to me...I am in great dispair...
    So it's my time, I must go...to find the place where I truly belong...
    So hold on dear friends...you've gotta be strong...
    It'll be hard, yes I know...but we've all got to go sometimes...and this is...
    My time.

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    Re: untitled

    well i don't think thats very nice... I care, I care deeply.
    so I think this poem is rough and straight to the point,
    my favourite part is this,

    So it's my time, I must go...to find the place where I truly belong...
    So hold on dear friends...you've gotta be strong...
    It'll be hard, yes I know...but we've all got to go sometimes...and this is...
    My time.
    this is true to me in the sense that I also feel like I don't belong.

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    Re: untitled

    Hmm this is quite good.. did'nt know you wrote poems... i don't really like the style...and there's some misspellings...

    But the poem overall is good cuz the feeling channelled through can be felt intensely.. ^^ nicely done there... keep up the good work

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