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    *untitled*

    I used to be the most loved monkey back in the jungle.
    Every new dark-and-light felt like a heavenly picture.

    But while time moved forward,
    we never knew how much we took those heavenly days for granted.

    And while time continued to pass,
    everything went from heavenly to dust,
    No smiles but pain.

    Then one day my Mom died of depression.
    My Dad swung away.

    And my only sister died of suicide,
    because she couldn’t bare living life without Mom and Dad.

    Then one dark-and-light,
    when I thought things couldn’t get any worst.

    A Human,
    with a killing toy,
    captured all my friends and locked them up in this huge cage he was holding.

    When I realized this I started to climb the tallest tree I could find.
    While climbing I felt a shadow below me and suddenly a micro-iron went through my skin and everything blacked- out.

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    Re: *untitled*

    Very extreme...........and dark and sad
    I feel like being pulled into a black vortex........
    Great job!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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