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    *untitled*

    No one saw him, no one cared
    About the boy who sat alone
    Fighting the demons that were haunting his thoughts
    He had no friends, shadows were home.

    He sat in the corner
    He didn't believe
    That someone like him
    Could get a moments reprieve.

    But then she came along
    And asked if she may
    Sit down next to him
    For the rest of the day.

    Because she too was like him
    Always alone
    Whenever in school
    Shadows were home.

    At the end of the school year
    The two fell in love
    When they first started talking
    They both fit like a glove.

    They shared all they had,
    They laughed and they cried
    And many years later
    Together they died.

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    Re: *untitled*

    Aw, that was sooo romantic and sweet. It made me smile... such a promising story. Reminded me that perhaps true love DOES exsist. And like the lovers in the story... I too, am somewhat of a rejected loner. So poems like this touch me where it hurts.
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    Re: *untitled*

    aww... a very sweet and romantic poem.. i liked it.. the rhyme and the flow of the poem was very good ^^ nicely done..

    At the end of the school year
    The two fell in love
    When they first started talking
    They both fit like a glove.

    They shared all they had,
    They laughed and they cried
    And many years later
    Together they died.
    nice way of ending...

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    This poem, to me, has a sense of a tragic hero..........
    Beautiful words!!!!!!!!!
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