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    Now under the leaves
    Of a moonlit willow tree
    I weave my magick
    Into the fabric that fate has made
    To change your destiny
    So the tears that has been cried
    Will never have
    Fallen.

    Yeah I know, but I do not know what to titled it. any suggestions.
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    Hey nice poem simple yet differnent, it rhymes well too, and a title for this one I could suggest, Weaving Magick?
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    I did not notice that I rhymed...is that possible.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragon Born View Post
    Now under the leaves
    Of a moonlit willow tree
    I weave my magick
    Into the fabric that fate has made
    To change your destiny
    So the tears that has been cried
    Will never have
    Fallen.

    Yeah I know, but I do not know what to titled it. any suggestions.
    Nice poem, Is DESTINY a good one for you thats sort of what popped in my head when I read it.

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    Dentiny...Destiny...Destiny...I like but I am open for more sugguestion.
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