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I come in darkness,
but fill the mind with light.
I bring enlightenment to some,
while gripping others in the hand of fear.
With me it can be a journey of inexplicable joy and sorrow,
What I will show you will often be unreachable.
Journey with me and what you see may haunt you,
Journey with me and you may never want to return home,
Journey with me and you will never know when it will end.
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i like this poem alot for the simple fact you
make embracing what most see as taboo
as way to see things in a better light if you
will.
and it is an intresting journey when you start
but how far will you go before you say its dark
enough? this poemreally is good i cant wait
to read more
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glad you enjoyed this poem HolderOfTheDarkChalice.
I'll have more later today or tomorrow.
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no problem and call me chris my friends
do and you really are good at yoiur writting
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ok I'll call you chris,
thank you but this isn't my best poem ever made.