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    "untitled"

    I come in darkness,
    but fill the mind with light.

    I bring enlightenment to some,
    while gripping others in the hand of fear.

    With me it can be a journey of inexplicable joy and sorrow,
    What I will show you will often be unreachable.

    Journey with me and what you see may haunt you,
    Journey with me and you may never want to return home,
    Journey with me and you will never know when it will end.

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    Re: "untitled"

    i like this poem alot for the simple fact you
    make embracing what most see as taboo
    as way to see things in a better light if you
    will.

    and it is an intresting journey when you start
    but how far will you go before you say its dark
    enough? this poemreally is good i cant wait
    to read more
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: "untitled"

    glad you enjoyed this poem HolderOfTheDarkChalice.
    I'll have more later today or tomorrow.

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    Re: "untitled"

    no problem and call me chris my friends
    do and you really are good at yoiur writting
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: "untitled"

    ok I'll call you chris,
    thank you but this isn't my best poem ever made.

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