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Not too shabby. I thought it was very good. I definitely think your girlfriend will enjoy reading your poem. It's very well-spoken and conveys a lot of your thoughts on how close you are in your relationship. The content itself shows how much work you put into it. Good luck.

This is another excellent poem: this line reminds me of a movie :

You are the person that makes me complete

Originally Posted by PhoenixSara

This is another excellent poem: this line reminds me of a movie :

you had me at hello


haha, yes, i was reffering to that crappy tom cruise movie, haha.

Originally Posted by NeoDeath90

This poem is something of a rough draft. I intend to give it to the girl i love for our one year next month.

My dearest love, my brightest flame
We both know time is a tiring game

We've both endured, we've both grown strong
And i feel that with you is where i belong

My icy heart melts when i hear your sweet voice
I feel my whole body begin to rejoice

Your smile is sunshine, your laughter the rain
Your kisses like heaven, that relieve all my pain

My twisted face smiles when i feel you are near
And i feel your embrace, your warm breath on my ear

My whole world, my darling, my lovely, my sweet
You are the person that makes me complete

What more can i say, what more can i do
Than kiss your soft lips, and say "i love you"

I love you, Lauren, with all my heart and from the bottom of my soul
~David

So beautiful. Keep up the good feelings. Maybe, I use your poem for some of my school's works.

Originally Posted by Heavenhanced

So beautiful. Keep up the good feelings. Maybe, I use your poem for some of my school's works.

be sure you give me credit for them, because no one likes their works plagerized