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    My head is full of confusion,
    My body of aches and pains,
    I feel my world falling around me,
    I see nothing but clouds and rain.

    In this mixed up and totally confused,
    World that I live in,
    I sometimes feel that I can never get out,
    That I can never win.

    Then I see your smiling face,
    And the sun shines bold and bright,
    The rain goes away, the confusion is gone,
    And everything just seems alright.

    When you hold me your love shows,
    Through your eyes, your arms, and smile,
    You rescue me from my mixed-up mind,
    At least for a little while.

    -dedicated to my first love-
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Untitled

    awww it was a really sweet poem. i liked how you did a little bit of rhyming scheme in there. i loved reading it ^^
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    Re: Untitled

    That was a nice poem.

    I loved the third stanza.

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