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What's up AO? It's been a min since I've posted or written so here goes nothing. Constructive criticism only!

Together is a thought that once flourished as wildly as flowers in spring.
Now those thoughts play repeatedly in her life's mental movie theater.
She sits confused as if no one can ever understand her life lingering pain.
How does one continue in the never ending journey of loves roller coaster?

The pain of losing the one who meant the most is a staggering blow.
Her heart bleeds and bellows for a chance to once again be heard and seen.
As darkness sets in and resides inside a heart like a hollowed tree.
She begins to remember things and do thing the way the have always been.

Loneliness begins to set in and she crumbles like a sand castle at the waters edge.
She cries out for help but fears no one will hear her and run to her aid.
Just as hope begins to flee like birds at the first sign of winter.
He reaches in and grabs her hand like lightning dancing through the air and touching the ground

Tears running softly down her cheek like rain falls on to a leaf without a sound
A gentle whisper like a cool summers breeze in her ear says it's going to be okay
Her sadness begins to subside like storm rolls away after it has brought chaos
Slowly her mind begins to clear and she focuses once more in the race for love.