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    Untitled (Flicker)

    When the lights go out,
    people become who they are not,
    They become who they are.

    Like a mask being taken off
    and like a second skin being shed,
    people change.

    Transformed into what they
    strive to avoid by means of light.
    But only when the lights go out.

    Truly, the soul us darkness.
    Why else would it build a
    barrier of meat around itself.

    When the sun loses its battle
    and falls from the sky,
    God goes on vacation and time slows.

    The oldest lesson man has ever learned is thrown away.
    Humility fleeing graciously into the light of the moon.
    The soul leaks out, darkening darkness.

    At night when the stars are hard
    mutation, evolution claws out of its cage
    but dies before it’s completed, dawn has come.

    When the streetlamps flicker in the dying irony
    that means Apollo is rested and ready again to fight,
    people change.

    They become who they are not,
    they become who that are.
    But only when the lights turn on.

    Like a new birth coming into the world,
    like a another identity being taken.
    Thus a new darkness can form.

    People change.
    They become who they are and are not.
    But only when the lights go out.

    They turn into everything they hate,
    everything they run from.
    But only when the lights turn on.

    ---
    Just something I thought of whilst being bored. It was one of those bouts of late night holy crap I have to write this stuff down things that happen to people.

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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    hmm this was a very interesting poem.
    Ilike yes, but the whole meaning of it.
    I really like it.
    And it's true in a scense that you change when the lights go out.
    It's like no one see's you when they turn their backs.
    But I really like this poem. It's good and though projoking.
    Keep it up. I hope to more of your work.(^.^)

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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    haha!
    thats what happens when your up too late =P
    lol no I liked it
    actually feels real
    it true you know
    you do become a different person at night
    well some of us do
    *evil laugh*
    lol j/k
    but good poem
    Last edited by KimiFemi; Mar 22, 2007 at 11:49 AM.

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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    was pretty good, needs some spelling work though, maybe you need to go to bed earlier than you could maybe spell.


    lol......

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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    I find it easier to write about other people rather than myself. And you did an okay job. Well done
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    Dood, you're all so nice... I totally didn't mess up on spelling on purpose, I swear.

    You all seem to get the poem, most of it. What about when the lights turn on? Don't we change into a being just as frightening as the one we turn to when it's dark out?
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Untitled (Flicker)

    Not all maybe some... dear flawedmind... well it might be some1 like me but im not sure...but it's not when the lights is off or on.. ^^
    Btw.. good job on the poem... ^^

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