Untitled(if you have a titled for this I'd like to hear it)

Days pass by,
still don't know why I love her,
know it's long gone,
through it all,
all else wrong.

The world passing me by,
self inflicted cuts to show what I went through,
blood on the blade,
a pain that can't seem to fade away,
two years of tears.

Sharing my fears with you,
a song to remember a memory,
please let me be alone,
alone in this,
with the walls closing in.

When a memory stabs me in the back,
lost control of everything,
lost it long ago now the world seems more black,
so long ago,
still it's with me through the days lingering in my head.

I want it dead to breath new air,
new air to live in,
a new era to be in,
not the corning walls that make,
me want to give in.

Life is full of sin,
but yet it's natural to be ourselves,
we got our hard times,
yet we try to stand tall,
even though we best it all.

very cool poem but maybe you should
try making paragraphs becuase i dont
see any stanza's here ,of course i am still
learnign stuff but atleast thats what i think.

the poem itself is really awesome
and i can relate to the pain of love
its cuts alot people deep and when
somone new cmes around they try to
give you something that hurt you
before .

and cutting your self to show
thwm how much they hurt you
is emo but its also a growing trend
for teens , this poem pretty much
shows how real life can affect kids.

i like that very expressive poem

I'm not sure of a title,but it is a great poem. It had alot of different emotions in it which made it that more interesting. Keep up the good work and I look forward to readgin more.

awesome poem,I think I have a title for it lets call it "A dark life"?