very cool poem but maybe you should
try making paragraphs becuase i dont
see any stanza's here ,of course i am still
learnign stuff but atleast thats what i think.
the poem itself is really awesome
and i can relate to the pain of love
its cuts alot people deep and when
somone new cmes around they try to
give you something that hurt you
and cutting your self to show
thwm how much they hurt you
is emo but its also a growing trend
for teens , this poem pretty much
shows how real life can affect kids.
i like that very expressive poem