very cool poem but maybe you should
try making paragraphs becuase i dont
see any stanza's here ,of course i am still
learnign stuff but atleast thats what i think.
the poem itself is really awesome
and i can relate to the pain of love
its cuts alot people deep and when
somone new cmes around they try to
give you something that hurt you
before .
and cutting your self to show
thwm how much they hurt you
is emo but its also a growing trend
for teens , this poem pretty much
shows how real life can affect kids.
i like that very expressive poem


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