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    *untitled* (this is just a small boring poem)

    Blood on the snow,
    People crying for loved ones.

    While others laugh,
    Laugh at the ones that are crying.

    I don't care for who has died,
    Because I have no more tears to shed.

    The people I loved are already dead.

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    Re: *untitled* (this is just a small boring poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    Blood on the snow,
    People crying for loved ones.

    While others laugh,
    Laugh at the ones that are crying.

    I don't care for who has died,
    Because I have no more tears to shed.

    The people I loved are already dead.
    Nice free verse poem. Although, i think that it is too short, so it needed to be a bit longer to had been better.

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