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    Just so you know, my boy, you're my pride and joy.

    Forget everybody else--you're my little boy.
    Regretting the decisions I've made in the past, I'm
    On the road to chang things so we can be happy at last.
    God, I miss you and love you so much! The pain

    Makes me feel like I've been repeatedly punched.
    You are the reason I'm changing my ways. You're

    Scared, I know. Don't worry, this is just a phase.
    One day soon, I hope, I'll be able to see you again.
    Never forget you're my son and my very best friend.


    ------------------------------------------------------

    I cry at night, knowing I can't be with you.
    But you're in my heart and my soul, you know... It's true!

    I'm miserable knowing I haven't seen you in days.
    I'm trapped in this never-ending emotional maze.

    I cry myself to sleep, damn near every night.
    But, I promise you, everything will be alright.

    I ask your forgiveness, I hope you understand.
    This is not what I wanted, not what I planned.

    I'll do all I can to make sure you return.
    You're my inspiration, the fire that makes my soul burn.

    I love you so much and I hope that you know
    I'm so sorry my actions are what made you go.

    I'll always appreciate the love that you give.
    You're my one and only. The reason I live.


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    Re: Untitled (x2)

    Aww, someone's a little sentimental. ^^ Very nice poem though, I can see you love your son very much.

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    Re: Untitled (x2)

    *wipes my tears* Dude, this is A1. I was reading it out loud and it felt like this sweet rap... (the good kind of rap). I love when you write its so real. Like the attention getter was awesome two. My fave one was the second poem. It was cool.
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