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    Upside down love

    So much for real love…

    It was all so perfect, you finally noticed me
    These years I’ve watched you love and get broken
    Still you never saw my heart lying out before you
    So what now

    No one told me I shouldn’t love you
    Who’s to say love is wrong, that it’s sin
    Their screaming it hurts my ears
    Why should we run from this, they’ll accept us

    Tell me, why are they angry with us
    All we did was open our hearts, is that bad
    No, no don’t cry over this, over me
    Here look, we’ll go away and love in exiled peace

    Just don’t ever regret this, I hope you never will
    Cause the second you do my heart will break
    The stars will fall and the moon will frown
    In those moments though, I’ll still love you dear sister of mine.

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    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Upside down love

    hey can you help wit some words? lol j/k anyway man its a good poem and its has a very good verse, keep it up

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    Re: Upside down love

    I kind of like this poem. Try posting it in our Library? That way some clan members will comment on it as well.
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    Re: Upside down love

    hmm very contraversal for some but i like hoe you was bold
    enough to talk about it,its like a taboo that everyone avoids
    like the flue, very cool poem i like how you did this pome very
    awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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