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    in ur arms

    yea this is like a short story but it's not

    i had a wonderful dream
    b/c u were right next to me.
    it was about our first kiss
    together on the beach holding hands as we watched the sunset
    when it was set and the stars were out
    u turned to me and said " the stars beauty is nothing compared to urs"
    and he kissed me..... as the light hit my window sill
    i woke up to find u were gone.
    i was scared
    afraid about forgetting the feeling of me in ur arms.
    then u snuck up behind me and tickled me
    with tears rolling down my face b/c i was fearing u left me
    u wrapted me in ur arms and apologized to me for hours
    but i was just happy to be in ur arms

    yea it's like a story but it's a poem!!! well u like it?
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    Re: in ur arms

    OMG it's soooo beautiful!!! seriously!!! I even started to cry... Such a wonderful poem you've written here!!! I'm so happy you posted it!!!
    It's truly wonderful!!! I enjoyed reading it sooo much! I adore it!!! Thank you for the emotions you brough with it!!!

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    Re: in ur arms

    i know that feeling that is sooo adoribal i really liked it a lot
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    Re: in ur arms

    this is a great feeling poem and your right it is like a story but still a great poem post more

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    Re: in ur arms

    thanks again for the replies and yea i know it's like a story but i think that it different
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    Re: in ur arms

    OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! This so beautiful and awesome!!!!! It's just so romantic amazing so fascinating to read!!!!!! Oh I hope to see more of your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: in ur arms

    WOW.... That's a really good poem/story, it's really really good and it's a really sweet and beautiful.... Really good job Ryo

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    Re: in ur arms

    wow that was very nice feeling...*love* you writed not that short and not that long ....oh i love it ....it's easy to understand what this poem talk a bout ....i like the feeling ....very nice...keep it up...

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