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    Re: Useless creation

    I agree with the comments of others, so I won't repeat what they already said. I'll just add this - After I read your poem, I reread it again, searching for the reason of your title. I couldn't find it. Perhaps I just missed something...? Anyways, because of that, I think your poem content failed to give justice to the title you gave it, or vice versa. I was able to feel the angst of your words, and your imagery helped a lot to make me understand it, but the title is a mystery for me. Anyways, good job, my only complaint is that title. It was an interesting title, but I just couldn't see its relation to the content of your work.

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    Oooh..the poem is quite harsh.The swearing may be offensive,but it serves a good purpose for this poem due to the fact that you are trying to grab our attention.I like that.Other than that,i have nothing else to say.

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    Re: Useless creation

    Very nie man! hahaha... serious huh?
    a good defender for a friend..
    I doubt it, your friend must be proud by these poem...

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Hehe, no. He doesn't know it's for him yet, I guess he will find it sooner.

    Or later.

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    Wow that person sure is mean. I would hate to be their enemy. Good poem I liked it.
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    Re: Useless creation

    ok thats really cool ^__^ 10/10 its really every meaningful ^__^

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    Re: Useless creation

    Really good Rave (^.^) I liked it much.
    The descrition was excelent I love it.
    Well I hope to see more.(^.^)

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    Re: Useless creation

    WOW, that was amazing!!!!!!
    meeeen that's a lot of feeling. Very nice I like it!!!!
    I wouldn't like to have u mad at me... meeeen!!!! that would be surely scary
    Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!!
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