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Reply With QuoteOooh..the poem is quite harsh.The swearing may be offensive,but it serves a good purpose for this poem due to the fact that you are trying to grab our attention.I like that.Other than that,i have nothing else to say.
I agree with the comments of others, so I won't repeat what they already said. I'll just add this - After I read your poem, I reread it again, searching for the reason of your title. I couldn't find it. Perhaps I just missed something...? Anyways, because of that, I think your poem content failed to give justice to the title you gave it, or vice versa. I was able to feel the angst of your words, and your imagery helped a lot to make me understand it, but the title is a mystery for me. Anyways, good job, my only complaint is that title. It was an interesting title, but I just couldn't see its relation to the content of your work.
Oooh..the poem is quite harsh.The swearing may be offensive,but it serves a good purpose for this poem due to the fact that you are trying to grab our attention.I like that.Other than that,i have nothing else to say.
Very nie man! hahaha... serious huh?
a good defender for a friend..
I doubt it, your friend must be proud by these poem...
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
Hehe, no. He doesn't know it's for him yet, I guess he will find it sooner.
Or later.
Wow that person sure is mean. I would hate to be their enemy. Good poem I liked it.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
ok thats really cool ^__^ 10/10 its really every meaningful ^__^
Really good Rave (^.^) I liked it much.
The descrition was excelent I love it.
Well I hope to see more.(^.^)
WOW, that was amazing!!!!!!
meeeen that's a lot of feeling. Very nice I like it!!!!
I wouldn't like to have u mad at me... meeeen!!!! that would be surely scary
Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!!"show me.... THE BEAST!!!" The Beauty and the Beast movie
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