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    vaguely

    Attached to her silhouette near me
    to every moment of her tenderness
    vaguely
    I came back to the distant childhood

    Attached to the footprints in spring
    to the Japanese song she taught me
    vaguely
    I was influenced by her happiness

    Attached to the little garden at dusk
    to the first time she told me her story
    vaguely
    I was impressed by the beauty of her maturity

    Attached to the rainy night
    to the moment she came to say goodbye to me
    vaguely
    I tasted the sadness of separation

    Foolish beating

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    Re: vaguely

    wow... this is kinda cool...nice poem structure... nicely done... a new experiment? i like it... ^^

    memories of the past of some1 near getting blurry... nice theme... with a nice way of saying it ^^ good job.. hope to read more of urs my friend

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    Re: vaguely

    ... Made shivers run down my spine... A great work here... It was really interesting to read it...
    It made me very emotional... Made me think of different kinds of love- to a relative or just to a friend (though I think this was to your relative)...
    It was something different...
    It was really nice to take a peek in your mind...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: vaguely

    This was very beautiful. It told a story, but only vaguely... Just kidding^^

    Actually, you did a wonderful job of depicting emotions here.
    I'd like to see more of work.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: vaguely

    This is a new style. I like it i hope to see more.

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    Re: vaguely

    To be honset This real ..Iam just Know her for long time ...
    When I was Six years you can say that ...But now She .....Died ...
    well I am just rember here ...when I listen to that song ...But she will stay in Heart for ever ...Thanks Buddies...alot ...

    Foolish beating

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