Originally Posted by Kasai Just a quick write and your results are this? I actually think the ending is something of black humor, or just plain funny to me. Either way, cant wait to see the revision. ***Wipes sweat off brow*** I'm glad I wasn't the only one slightly amused by this.
... Not Ever Again...
^^It's a really good poem,I like how it flows from start to finish,even though the ending is sad.