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    Velvet

    Sorry it's so short everyone, but I am fairly satisfied with it, so I hope you all will be too ^-^


    There's a wide, bright sun smiling at me from
    a place out of reach, and there's a banshee
    whispering to me through clouded thoughts.

    The storm has subsided, a new face has
    washed upon the shore.

    Someone to sing to, someone to weep to, another
    dream I've been having or reality?

    Thoughts so loud, I'm almost sure someone
    might hear them sounding off within me.

    My heart pulsating from time to time resides
    within the words built up in my throat, unsaid,
    forever staying the same.

    And maybe there is such a thing called hope,
    maybe it will all end a storybook ending, and
    maybe I'll find myself at the bottom of a page.
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    Re: Velvet

    I like it. I don't care if it's short to tell you the truth i love it!!! OMG i Definately want to see you write more often^^..
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Velvet

    I really enjoyed reading that ^_^
    I am no poet.....far from it in fact so I have no idea what the deeper meaning is...totally going to have to fill me in later.

    I really did like it though good job

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