The heart you crushed was mine, and
i all i saw was red from all the things you
said not a care from you i got ,my heart it's
dead to you as i drink away my pain to forget you
is my call in life because you are bad for me.
My love for you was real ,all you did was laugh
when the time came for you to hold me ,all you
did was stab my back ,so as i sit here halfway
though my bottle i see nothing but your face.
My vengence will be complete when i take
your love with my last sip ,how that will make my day
you found somone new so soon how you really must
love this game you play,not caring for my heart you had,
as you threw it out the window and and smiled.
My heart is almost stoped as this bottle flows
through my vains,its nothing new to you as
another guy just dies of a broken heart , i hope you
treat this new love better because he is my freind,
so now i am almost done and i feel the pain slip away.
So as i forget you and all the pain you gave me
i will forget the pins and sufering that you love gave to me,
farewell to your love and hello to my demise ,i fade away
wit this last bit of poiosn in my mouth ,my vengence now
complete you will never hurt me again.
this poem is about how trust and love can be given and then it be turned
away with a blink of an eye ,wit out even careing its a cold hard fact
that love is never found unless both give it 100% if it isnt give that full
attention the love was never really there to beigne with. and it can drive
the one it hurts to drastic measure's .
Thats a nice poem Holder. Deep and it has nice wording to it. Love can go both ways, very true. Keep up the good work!
Yet another very good poem from you. You just keep them coming don't you? lol I liked it a lot and it's true. Love does hurt sometimes and drives the person hurt to do things they wouldn't normally do. You capture real life so great, keep it up!
thanks i am lgad you liked it and i see you both got the meaning i am glad
ad love really can kill if you let it
I know excatly how that feels like! *sighs and brushes away a tear~ very good
This is probably your best piece ever! I love it, nice use of words and emotions!
nice full of emotion. like the words. reminds me of somethings
Omg!! That was sooooooo awesome big bro!! *crys* Beautifuly done! :) I really loved this! :) And I think you got the point across very well.Love can be such a wondeful thing but it also can be the worse thing you've ever felt.And sometimes it can drive some people 2 do things that they never dreamed that they would do.
Anyways,Awesome job big bro! :)